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[spiralsheep]

They counted to three and then each bolted, in a sprint. They ran in opposite directions. They ran screaming. They ran singing. They ran shouting at the top of their lungs. And they ran like this, crying out in the night, so each might hear the other, for as long as they possibly could.

Comments

[scytale]

Oh the repetition and the rhythm here is great. And oh gosh, that ending!!!

[spiralsheep]

Such an odd book that I enjoyed so much, partly because of the prose style. I think that paragraph might be intentionally reminiscent of children's books intended to teach reading with short repetitive sentences.